Blog 5

With my Peer review I mainly notice Idea. I went through everyone papers and some beginning were perfect others weren’t. Like it was kind of boring and not interesting. I told this person to maybe start off with an exciting way to keep the readers intruged into the writing. I also, talked about how one person basically didn’t talk anything about their feelings about their paper. I suggested adding more of their opinion making it easier for the reader to connect to there work. Instead of someone reading it and completely not making any connection and will cause people to be confused on what you are trying to say here. There I used under ideas. People are less willing to read something if it doesn’t have a great beginning to hook you in. Also, it is hard when you can’t connect to the text. Then it kind of is pointless for that person because they don’t understand what they just read.