After reading my class mates beginning paragraphs it made me think on how I could improve my intro paragraph. I looked at a couple different peoples work and saw that some of there entries and perspectives were completely different from mine. It kind of opened up my eyes to look at it a different way. Looking and anaylzing my fellow classmates work made me a little better at writing. I saw how people form their beginning paragraphs and how I started mine. It made me realize that mine was boring and not interesting as the others. That’s when it inspired me to create a whole new beginning that is not boring and actually very intriguing.
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