My 150 comment to my peer:
The way you first started this essay instantly hooked me in. Your whole essay has a great follow to it. Also, you added some background on the author of the article you were using, which was very interesting and made your argument pop. It helped me to understand that you aren’t just getting this information form some random stranger, instead it made me realize that the author knew what he was talking about. This made it more easier to follow the argument. Other than that you are on the right track with this essay. Keep up the good work.
